Monday, June 11, 2012

freewrite #2




What concepts did you discuss? How did your concepts add to your definition of that concept or complicate it?
The concepts that I discussed with one of my partners was violence, that added more definition to the definition I already had. She said that how the thieves were going and stealing from them and how they were poor and that they were going to kill whoever was coming in their community to steal. For example they started having shifts were two people at a time from the community had to be guards so t;hat no one would go inside and steal. And if they saw someone they qould shoot them. Laurens dad said they had the authority to do that because If they called the cops, they could not afford paying the fees that the pilice would charge.

Another concept that my partner mentioned, and I added to my concepts was privatization. She mentioned how people before the economy was this bad, they would make their food with corm and acorn and now they have to buy their own crops. Also I believe water was privatized and one day when they were having a town meeting or something like that laurens dad was talking and it started rainng outside and people left from there to their homes so they can hrab buckets and collect the water that was pouring because it was free and it hadn’t rain in a very long time.

What character do you care about? Why? Whatd does that character add to the story?

I think I care about Lauren most in this character because she seems to have agency in herself even though she is only 15. I say that she has agency because she is thinking about how things really are and she wants to get prepared for it. And she told her friend about what she knew and she just scared her friend away. Her dad gave her good advice though. He told her to not only tell people what they should do. That she should teach them what is going on and what can happen and how they can be prepared/ if she only tells them what she thinks and others do not know why she is saying that, they might believe her but if nothing of she says happens then they are just going to take her as a joke the second time she wants to prepare others for something big that can happen. I like the advice he saisd. TEACH PEOPLE, NOT JUST TELL THEM WHAT TO DO.

Thursday, June 7, 2012

Final Essay


Corporations and Power

            Families have found themselves hopeless in a struggling economy where unemployment has become all too familiar. We have a corrupt economic system in which big banks and corporations have too much power over society. In the book, The Corporation by Joel Bakan, he describes the perspective of each stakeholder and how they are being affected by the actions the corporations are taking. Stakeholders are those that can or are being affected by the decisions the corporations make. Consumers are being affected in a positive way because they get affordable products, which help them because of their economic status. Corporations are affecting workers in a positive and negative way because they are provided with jobs but they are getting their human rights taken away. Lastly, the shareholders, who are those who own stock in corporations, are being affected positively and negatively because they are making profit but losing money at the same time.  Even though corporations are providing jobs in developing countries and making products that are affordable, they exploit people and dehumanize them. In order for this problem to stop, we as consumers need to come together to become aware of corporations who exploit workers. If we as consumers come together to try to change how corporations work, we can start by changing who we are as consumers.
            Consumers are the ones who give easy profit to the corporations. Corporations give the impression that they are being righteous to the people they are providing labor for. The consumers, when they purchase a product they have the connotation that it’s a positive deed that the corporations are doing by providing sweat shops which is labor to those in poor countries. Also, another reason that we as consumers do not complain about corporations is because we get affordable prices. In the book, The Corporation, Bakan claims, “ … these people would make great neighbors. . .  when you meet with them in person their quite decent…” page 70. The shareholders are great people that are still working even when they are off the clock. For example, they can live next to you and be a great neighbor but aside from being a great neighbor they are using the strategy of stealth marketing, a new technique that corporation use to persuade the consumer to buy a product, to persuade you in to buy the product, and then just there they have benefited from you. They will use anything that is under the reach of their power to sell their products and increase the company’s profit.
However, corporations are affecting workers in a positive way because they are providing them with jobs. As corporations grow larger and larger jobs are being created for many people. As Friedman, from The Corporation, would say, “ …corporate externalities have “enormous effects on the world at large”… though they can be positive—jobs are being created and useful products developed by corporations in pursuit of their self-interest…” (61). Friedman is saying that corporations provide jobs for those whom are searching for labor. Not precisely the shareholders but those in developing countries who are willing to work with harsh working conditions, as long as they get paid so they can survive day by day.
            We as consumers take the affordable products for granted and do not realize that as we buy more and more of those products the workers in sweatshops are getting over worked. Unlike the consumers, workers have the option to either take the working conditions the sweatshop has for them or they can starve and not have labor. “ Sweatshop workers do not generally choose to work in order to gain some extra disposable income for luxuries, or simply to take pleasure in the activity of working,” Matt Zwolinski claimed that workers are willing to take those conditions as long as they have a job. They have the choice to not work in those conditions, yet they take the opportunity that those who direct Sweatshops give them because they feel that with labor they will be freed. Reality is that with working at the sweatshops, you are working under their conditions and you have no other option to accept the job, because of the scarcity of jobs.
Even though corporations provide labor to those in need, they are being affected negatively as well because they are being exploited, dehumanized and getting their human rights taken away. Corporations provide a reasonable amount of jobs for the people in the society, but those jobs do not have fair labor standards. Kernaghan, the director of the National Labor Committee, an organization with a mandate to stop American corporations from using sweat-shop labor, went deep in to the investigation and found out that United States and Europe corporations use sweatshop labor and exploit people, mainly teen girls in to working for them. They have the opportunity to work, but the pay is so low that they wont be able to survive with 8 cents and hour. “A time was allotted for each task, with units of ten thousandth’s of a second used for the breakdown. With all the units added together, the calculations demanded that each shirt take a maximum of 6.6 minutes to make—which translates into 8 cents’ worth of labor for a shirt Nike sells in the United States for $22.99” (Bakan 66). He provides us with the information that young girls are being provided with jobs but they are being taken advantage of. There should be laws and regulations in those sweatshops that we don’t know about. The government needs to get the control that he needs in order to make regulations for those in sweatshops to have fair labor standards because they are being exploited, beaten and even getting fired if they seem to be worn out because they aren’t as productive as the new ones coming in. The workers are being seen and used as tools, due to the fact that if they don’t work as fast or productive as they want, they fire them and get a “new” group people. By new group of people I mean a new group of workers who are ready to work, despite the working conditions. The workers are usually employed until the age of 25, that’s because they get worn out by that age due to 12-hour day shift, no breaks and low wages which they can afford to live day by day.
Those who own stocks, shareholders, will do anything they can do to serve the bottom line, which is increasing profit for the corporation at the end of the day. One example is the one where corporations take jobs to other countries because it’s easier for them to exploit others who are willing to sacrifice to work. In the article, A Search for Standards to Monitor Labor Conditions Worldwide by S Prakash Sethi, noted how corporations use poor countries and make use their cheap and abundant labor. Sethi wrote, “They prefer operating in those countries where local laws covering worker organizations do not exist or are poorly enforced” (Sathi 280). Corporations prefer to operate in other countries where laws are not enforced and they can exploit others to work. Corporations have the connotation that consumers will not find out about these exploitations because we are ignorant. We only shop because of their branding, they brainwash us with all these brands that we “need” in order to fit in or be like everyone else.  When money is benefiting corporations they do not care who they are hurting. Take the example of the General Motors, GM, they dangerously positioned the fuel tank to save costs on the car. Patricia Anderson, who owned a 1979 Chevrolet Malibu car at the time, was in a car collision. A car slammed into the back of her car. She sued the company for the explosion of the car because they are putting people in danger. It seemed that they had put profit above public safety.
In conclusion, I believe that we as consumers need to become aware about how corporations really operate. Their only objective is to increase their benefits and meet the bottom line, which is profit. We as consumers can put a stop to this problem by developing awareness by questioning what we buy. There’s times were we don’t need certain things and we just buy them because of the brands. We are brainwashed by the certain brands that we “need” in order to be luxurious and they make it seem like we need those products, yet we don’t. we need to start shopping at local places where we know where they do not contribute to sweatshops, we may not completely stop this issue, but we will start spreading awareness to others. It could be possible for sweatshops to get fair labor standards. At the end of the day, workers are affected because they are being dehumanized by corporations privatizing their human rights. We as consumers take our products as something we need, however its just the advertising and the branding that corporations have that makes us think that way. Lastly, the shareholders are affected positively and negatively because they are exploiting others, which means they are not paying much for getting their products done. Bakan asserted,“…they are institutions which have really only one mission, and that is to increase shareholder value”(35). Going back to the GM example, they have to pay the price for them putting others in danger just because they want to increase their profit. Finally, I believe that we as shareholders should come together with other people to make a change in the corporate power, we govern our selves, and those in developing countries have the right to have fair labor standards and continue to have their human rights.


                                                     Works cited                 

Sethi, Prakah S. "A SEARCH FOR STANDARDS TO MONITOR LABOR CONDITIONS WORLDWIDE." (n.d.): n. pag. Web. 06 June 2012. <http://http://library.foothill.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=buh&AN=20836359&site=eds-live>.


Zwolinski, Matt. "SWEATSHOPS, CHOICE, AND EXPLOITATION." Academic Journal (2007): 689-93. Web. 02 June 2012. http://http://library.foothill.edu:2048/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=buh&AN=27019122&site=eds-live

Bakan, Joel. The Corporation: The Pathological Pursuit of Profit and Power. New York: Free, 2004. Print.

Wednesday, June 6, 2012

Lessons learned about the corporation


1a.
  • Corporations have more power than the government.
  • The bottom line for corporations is "profit" and that they don't care about the consumer or the workers.
  • I learned that corporations have many techniques such as ad's and stealth marketing in order for them get profit.
  • We as consumers are the ones that can change who we are as consumers in questioning what we buy. sometimes we don't need things and we just buy them because of the branding or because of the ad's and how they are presented to us.
  • I also learned about the sweat shop labor, I did not know they existed. Now when I shop at a store,I always wonder if those stores have sweatshops creating products for them.
b.

  • I learned to shorten my research words in order to get effective results that can actually work for me.
  • By researching the same concept that I was trying to talk about I got a lot of results and got two of my articles through he resources that I did not know that existed.
c.

  • How do corporations make stealth marketing effective? How do they know where to go or who to provide that information to?
  • How do sweat shops affect the consumers? and why should we be concerned about the sweatshops?


Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Research Findings


Questions:
What is the purpose of corporations using young teens in sweat-shop labor?
What are the effects of people working with no fair labor standards?

“Sweatshops, Choice, and Exploitation” by Matt Zwolinski
            Summary: This article is called Sweatshops, choice and exploitation and it talk about the different reasons that people accept these conditions to work in sweatshops. For example, they have the choice to not work in those conditions yet they take the opportunity that the people who direct the sweatshops give them because they want to be freed. They don’t work to get luxury and expensive products, they only work to survive. It also describes how the government and other third parties deprive from refraining sweatshop labors and deprive workers from accepting the jobs their.
Quotes:
 “ Sweatshop workers do not generally choose to work in order to gan some extra disposable income for luxuries, or simply  to take pleasure in the activity of working.” (Zwolinski 692)

“.. there is a strong moral reason for third parties such as  consumers and host and home country  governments to refrain from acting in ways which are likely to deprive sweatshops workers of their jobs, and that both the policies traditionally promoted by anti sweatshop activists…”( Zwolinski 690)

These two quotes helped me understand the question that I posed because it is giving me the answers of why people accept sweatshop labor. Also, it is giving me an idea of how corporations get a benefit of having them working there. It gives me the understanding that corporations and the government know that it exists and they do not do anything to stop it. maybe they are doing that because they get profit out of them.
Key concepts:
·      Policies
·      Voluntary self-regulation
·      Standards
·      Violating others rights

“A search for standards to monitor labor conditions worldwide” by S prakash sethi

Summary: This article is describing and telling the reader how the corporations actually work. It is letting us know how they think and why sweatshops happen, they happen because laws are not being enforced in those places where the companies move. Corporations, move to other countries because it is easier to exploit workers and give them harsh working conditions, yet, they will still work no matter how much they get paid or how much they have to work because they need the cents to survive.

Quotes:
“MNCs use both the fact and threat of moving their purchases and capital to another country in order to extract maximum productivity gains from cheap and abundant labor.” pG 272
            This quote is explaining why the corporations take their labor to other countries because its easier to exploit people that are in need of jobs. This can help me go further in my ideas because it is giving me the understanding that corporations are violating the laws by going somewhere else where the laws are not being enforced.

“Local corruption creates conditions for non-enforcement of even weak laws with regard to worker safely, health, wages, and working conditions.” Pg273

Key concepts:
·      Exploitation
·      Corruption
·      Laws not being enforced

Sunday, May 13, 2012

Unit 1Final Essay and Reflection



            In the book Hearts and hands: Building Community in violent times by Luis Rodriguez, a former gang member, community activist, foster parent of troubled youth, wants to bring awareness and demonstrate the possibility for change when it comes to down to violence in the community. He wants to inform community leaders that have the power to provide resources to youth, academic students and politics, government that the solutions that they have today are increasing violence and that youth have the capability to change with other preventative routes. His purpose is to provide context, challenge the assumptions, to demonstrate the possibility for change when it comes to people like him. He wants to find a way of empowering those who are affected by violence. He wants to create change. There a many people who believe that youth who was troubled once will never change. They have the assumption that if they are affiliated with gangs they should be called “monsters”, and not treated like humans, they believe that they should be isolated and go to prison because those with authority and parents do not give them the opportunity for that individual to explore other ways to create change. They have the misconception that ones a gang member, always a gang member and will never change. The problem in our community is that society fails to teach youth to no be violent; they isolate them for the mistakes they do and don’t give them the opportunity to find a solution. Therefore, youth turn to gangs to find comfort and acceptance. The solution would be that youth should be encouraged to attend programs, which will help them change unlike, being isolated like the current system does it.
            Youth that is believed to be affiliated with gang’s, are now called “monsters” and they have the connotation that they do not deserve to be treated as humans. Those with authority make regulations for the troubled youth, like treating them in court as adults. They are humans themselves and deserve the same respect as any other human being in the community. In the book, Hearts and hands, Rodriguez claims, “Of course being called a “monster” now a days had the connotation of not being a human—an animal—therefore, deserving of less than human consideration” (Rodriguez 31). This makes me view that violence changes the whole perspective on people and how they view those that are involved violence. People in the community should not judge the youth, because they do not know the reason on why they join gangs and why they are violent. Youth happen to join gang’s, which leads them to violence, one factor that leads the path is the experiences they have at home. For example, Francisco, from the book hearts and hands, was physically abused by his step-father, his mother hold him down so he can beat Francisco. That experience affected him, in feeling the sense of not belonging there and not feeling loved by his mother anymore. Youth need to feel surrounded by people that receive them with hearts and hands; which is necessary for their proper growth.
            Youth need support and guidance from the community and their families, they need to be reached out from people that can help them experience proper growth and can help them succeed in life. He asserts, “Young people need a place—both at home and in the community—of unconditional acceptance, where they are honored, where their natural gifts are nurtured and they can live out purposeful lives” (Rodriguez 50). I believe youth can succeed in trying to change for good, if adults can help them feel accepted by the community and honored, the youth will feel encouraged and will try harder to become engaged in life and find their ability to reform the world with their own gifts. A good example, is Francisco, which he was involved with gang members soon after he felt unloved and misplaced by his mother and step father. An English teacher found the potential in Francisco and gave him the patience to help him study for his General Equivalency Diploma (GED). She saw a genius not a gangster, Francisco was desperately seeking to be filled. It took time, but he succeeded, he became a father and vowed to not repeat the mistakes his own family did with him.
People need to not judge others and think that they are not going to change just because they made a mistake once.  Rodriguez provides, “The group cant meet here anymore, he declared. I’ve heard you have gang members in the group. We don’t allow any gang member in our facilities” (73). It was unfair how the director of the community center where the youth would meet, told them that they could no longer meet there because he had heard that they were gang members. They were once affiliated with gangs, but they were in the community center, involved in activities because they were willing to change. I believe that the society in which youth is also part of, needs to help the youth instead of rejecting them and putting them aside. Our methods of authority towards the troubled youth, is only pushing them away by isolating those who do “bad” things. The justice system that we currently have, should have alternatives other than isolating the prisoners in jail. The alternative would be programs in which the youth can reflect on their life’s and the problems they have, rather than being isolated in prison, forgetting how your community works and putting others in danger because the prisoners do not know how to act once they are released in to the community.
Youth seek to find their place where they feel recognized and they can see their way out of violence and their involvement in gangs if any. Rodriguez created a program called Youth Struggling for Survival (YSS), this program is set to reach out and assist youth who are falling into traps of violence, drugs, and alcohol. Rodriguez describes, “ The purpose of these workshops was to take twenty to thirty young writers from various public and private schools, homeless youth shelters, and violence prevention programs and help prepare them for a writers life” (219). Having Luis take those kids to the workshops and having them find themselves with writing is a good prevention program because it helps them take their mind off of the streets and violence, and they are more likely to be involved in activities that can help them feel honored, welcomed and acknowledged for what they do.
In conclusions, this issue is important to the community because it makes the community members think about how many youth are involved in violence and the reasons are not only because of gangs. Everyone from the community should care about this problem because anyone from their family can be in the certain situation. Like I said before, if we continue to focus on the bad things youth do they will continue to ignore what you say and turn to others for comfort, support and acceptance. People need to stop categorizing youth based on what they see around them. Young kids usually sacrifice themselves and turn to drugs, violence, gangs and prison, by paying with their lives just because those in their community fail to give them the place they need in order for them to feel accepted
     
  1. How do violence, pain, and loss impact our personal identities? Our communities?                I believe that violence affects our personal identities in many ways. It can impact you mentally, or physically and then you wont be the same after that .For example, in the book hearts and hands, there's two siblings and one of them is believed to be involved in gangs and he gets thrown to jail. He was very close to his brother and ever since his brother got thrown in to jail because he was believed to be affiliated with gangs he hasn't been the same. He has anger towards people and he feels lonely because the only person that he had was him. So this goes back to how violence and being involved in gangs can cause that sense of loss in you an d then at that point you just don't care. 
  2. Violence impacts our community in a bad way because it can make people scared to go out and not feel that comfort of being in the community. Gangs are usually against other gangs and that's how violence is made. Also, it can affect the community in a negative way because violence is giving the youth a perspective that it is okay for them to do what they see. like vandalism and shooting others and having a rival gangs. it gives the youth to mind set of not doing anything with their lifes wither sent to jail or dead

           

Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Unit 1: Revision Plan

2a. Yes
b. yes
c. Yes, i need to fix my thesis based on the comments my peers gave me. my thesis is based on three different points and my peers gave me feedback on the points that i make in my body paragraph because I'm making two different points in my essay. I need to fix it because i need to focus on certain points more than others i feel like my essay is out of content.
3.a "Yes, I think Amalia will talk about her believe of why youth can succeed, then why the youth join gangs, and finally the solution she believes will help stop or fight the violence." (Jose)
b. this quote will help me because it shows on the part that i need to focus on in my essay.I was focusing on why the youth join, but in reality i need to focus on the solutions that will help stop the violence and will help youth reflect on their bad habits.
c.·  "In paragraph 2, you provide a quote support but it does not support your point because you are trying to emphasis that authority pushes young people into gangs, but your readers would not know what you meant by using Rodriguez’s quote." (daisy)
d. This comment will help me because i now know that i need to put an explanation at the end of the paragraph 2, i just put a quote and i did not put an explanation and why it relates to the theme of my essay.
4. Yes i think that i have to revise my body paragraphs because my essay os all over the place. I need to find one concept that i need to focus on and expand and develop more on it.