The most helpful comments from my peer session were that my peers wrote on the side margins telling me on what ideas I need to develop on and on what reasons I have to expand. Also, it was helpful that they found my thesis on their own, it shows me that my thesis is clear and that its in the right place in the introduction. The least helpful information that my peers gave me was answering the questions on the peer response worksheet because they weren't specific on the things i did good on my essay, they were focusing more on the things I needed to work on.
I plan on changing my thesis, by changing I mean that I need to move my sentences around in my introduction. I need to change me thesis by adding information about why it is a problem and what are the consequences about group minds. I also have to have to add my opinion about what I think about group and why I think that. I have to add why I agree to her proposal and what is it that I don't agree. Specific tools that I will use to accomplish this plan that I have is use my notes that I took in class that says what I have to include, like the requirements. Also what is going to be very useful is the peer review notes and the feedback that they gave me on my essay. Also, I found very useful and I know that I am going to use the feedback you gave me on my essay.
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